How To Use Prowritingaid, Grammarly, And Hemingway Like A Pro
Table of Contents
- Know Your Tools: Strengths and Best Use Cases
- Set Up for Success: Configuration and Customization
- A Proven Workflow for Book-Length Manuscripts
- Using Reports Like a Pro (What to Fix vs. What to Ignore)
- Preserve Voice While You Self-Edit
- Advanced Tips: Integrations, Shortcuts, and Collaboration
- Frequently Asked Questions
Know Your Tools: Strengths and Best Use Cases
Three tools. Three jobs. Treat them like a crew. Assign work, and your draft sharpens faster. Mix roles, and chaos follows.
ProWritingAid: deep analysis for long projects
ProWritingAid thrives on big manuscripts. The software runs dozens of reports, then points to patterns you miss after page 200.
Where ProWritingAid shines:
- Style and readability. Flags wordy lines, glue words, and clunky phrasing.
- Pacing. Finds slow patches where nothing moves.
- Consistency. Spelling, hyphenation, capitalization, numbers, headings.
- Repeats. Echoes and overused words across chapters.
Best use:
- First serious pass on a chapter or section.
- Line edits with structural polish in mind.
Quick example:
Original: Mara looked around, and she saw the dark hallway, and she started to slowly walk forward.
After a ProWritingAid pass: Mara scanned the hallway and walked forward.
Mini exercise:
- Open one chapter, 1,500 to 3,000 words.
- Run Style, Overused Words, Readability, Sticky Sentences, Consistency.
- Fix three high-impact issues per page. Skip changes that chip away at voice. Save a version, move on.
Grammarly: fast checks for correctness and consistency
Grammarly watches mechanics. Grammar, punctuation, concision, and tone. The tool moves fast, which helps during copyedits and proofreads.
Where Grammarly helps most:
- Subject verb agreement, misplaced modifiers, run-ons, comma usage.
- Consistent punctuation, quotes, ellipses, em dashes, serial comma, spacing.
- Clarity rewrites that shave bloat.
- Tone checks, so a calm narrator does not drift into snark.
Best use:
- Second pass after the heavy ProWritingAid work.
- Late-stage cleanup before sending to beta readers or an editor.
Quick example:
Original: Running to the station, the rain soaked Leo.
Grammarly fix: Running to the station, Leo got soaked by rain.
Stronger final: Leo ran to the station and got soaked.
Mini exercise:
- Set goals, audience and formality first.
- Accept mechanical fixes. Review clarity rewrites line by line.
- Reject suggestions which clash with your style sheet.
Hemingway Editor: final clarity and flow
Hemingway Editor flags hard-to-read sentences, passive voice, and adverbs. The interface nudges you toward clean, high-contrast prose.
Where Hemingway delivers:
- Shortening long sentences.
- Reducing adverbs with stronger verbs.
- Turning passive into active where precision matters.
- A last sweep for sentences that sprawl.
Best use:
- Final polish after grammar and consistency work.
- Blog posts, essays, lean thriller prose, tight non-fiction.
Quick example:
Original: The door was slowly closed by Jake, which was surprising to everyone.
After Hemingway: Jake closed the door, surprising everyone.
Mini exercise:
- Paste plain text into Edit mode.
- Fix anything marked “very hard to read.” Leave fragments which serve voice.
- Trim adverbs by trading them for verbs with muscle. “Spoke softly” to “whispered.” “Looked quickly” to “glanced.”
Assign roles so tools do not fight each other
- ProWritingAid for line editing and structure. Big picture patterns, sentence flow, consistency.
- Grammarly for correctness and reliability. Grammar, punctuation, concision, tone alignment.
- Hemingway for clarity and cadence. Shorter lines, fewer adverbs, less passive.
A simple field test:
- Take one scene. Run ProWritingAid first. Fix repeats, stickiness, and pacing.
- Send the same scene through Grammarly. Clean commas, verb agreement, and clunky modifiers.
- Finish in Hemingway. Shorten two bulky sentences. Remove three adverbs. Keep one fragment for rhythm.
Order matters. ProWritingAid moves words around in larger ways, so start there. Grammarly tightens bolts, so place that work second. Hemingway trims surface weight, so finish here.
One warning from the trenches:
- Tools reward restraint. Accept suggestions which raise clarity, timing, or consistency. Decline anything which dulls voice or breaks character. Read dialogue aloud after every round. If a line thuds, roll back.
Used with clear roles, this trio turns revision from guesswork into a clean sequence. Less flailing, more focused passes. Your future self will thank you. Your editor will too.
Set Up for Success: Configuration and Customization
Configuration takes five minutes. Skip it, and you waste hours fighting suggestions you don't need.
Most writers treat these tools like spell checkers. They paste text and accept everything flagged in red. Wrong approach. Smart writers customize first, then edit.
ProWritingAid: choose your document type and goals
ProWritingAid asks what you're writing. Answer honestly. The tool changes its advice based on your choice.
Document types that matter:
- Creative: Fiction, poetry, memoirs. Lighter grammar enforcement, more style focus.
- Business: Reports, emails, proposals. Stricter grammar, clarity over voice.
- Academic: Papers, theses. Complex sentences allowed, formal tone expected.
- Web: Blog posts, articles. Shorter paragraphs, active voice, readable grade levels.
Set readability goals before you run reports. Literary fiction tolerates Grade 12 complexity. Thriller readers prefer Grade 8. Young adult stays closer to Grade 6. Know your audience, then tell the tool.
Quick setup:
- Open Settings, choose Document Type.
- Set Readability Goal (grade level range).
- Pick your writing style: Creative for most fiction, Academic for literary work, Web for accessible prose.
Build your personal style sheet next. ProWritingAid learns your preferences and stops flagging choices you make on purpose.
Common style decisions:
- Serial comma: "red, white, and blue" versus "red, white and blue"
- Numbers: "twenty-three" or "23"
- Hyphenation: "email" or "e-mail"
- Spelling variants: "toward" or "towards"
Add house terms to your custom dictionary. Character names, place names, invented words, technical terms. The tool stops marking them as errors.
Grammarly: set goals and dialect
Grammarly's Goals feature shapes every suggestion. Four settings control the feedback.
Essential Goals setup:
- Audience: General, Knowledgeable, Expert. General simplifies language, Expert allows complexity.
- Formality: Informal, Neutral, Formal. Informal permits contractions and casual tone.
- Domain: Academic, Business, General, Technical, Creative. Creative relaxes grammar for voice.
- Intent: Inform, Describe, Convince, Tell a Story. Each intent changes style priorities.
Example: Writing a fantasy novel?
- Audience: General
- Formality: Neutral
- Domain: Creative
- Intent: Tell a Story
Writing a business proposal?
- Audience: Knowledgeable
- Formality: Formal
- Domain: Business
- Intent: Convince
Select your dialect. US English differs from UK, Canadian, and Australian. Choose wrong, and Grammarly flags correct spellings as errors.
US: color, realize, center
UK: colour, realise, centre
Canadian: colour, realize, centre
Australian: colour, realise, centre
Add names and genre terms to your personal dictionary. Fantasy writers need "elven," "orc," "mage." Mystery writers use "perp," "vic," "unsub." Science fiction demands "terraforming," "FTL," "android."
Hemingway: edit mode and readability targets
Hemingway Editor offers two modes. Write mode hides distractions. Edit mode shows diagnostics. Use Edit mode for revision work.
Paste plain text to avoid formatting clutter. Rich text from Word brings fonts, colors, and spacing that distract from the analysis. Copy your chapter, paste as plain text, then review.
Set realistic readability targets for your genre:
- Thrillers, mysteries: Grade 6–8
- Literary fiction: Grade 8–12
- Academic writing: Grade 12+
- Blog posts, articles: Grade 6–9
- Young adult: Grade 6–8
- Middle grade: Grade 4–6
Remember: Grade level measures sentence length and syllable count, not intelligence. Complex ideas work in simple sentences.
Turn off rules you routinely ignore
All three tools let you disable suggestions you don't want.
Common rules to disable:
- Split infinitives: "to boldly go" sounds better than "to go boldly"
- Oxford comma: Pick your style guide and stick with it
- Passive voice: Sometimes passive voice serves the story
- Sentence fragments: Dialogue needs fragments. Characters don't speak in complete sentences.
ProWritingAid setup:
- Go to Settings, Writing Style
- Uncheck rules you ignore
- Save custom settings
Grammarly setup:
- Click your profile, Customize
- Turn off specific grammar rules
- Adjust formality and tone preferences
Hemingway tips:
- Ignore grade-level warnings for literary prose
- Keep some adverbs when they add precision
- Preserve passive voice in scientific or formal contexts
Quick configuration checklist
Before you edit your first chapter:
ProWritingAid:
- [ ] Set document type (Creative, Business, Academic, Web)
- [ ] Choose readability goal range
- [ ] Add character names and invented terms to dictionary
- [ ] Turn off split infinitive and fragment warnings for fiction
Grammarly:
- [ ] Configure Goals (audience, formality, domain, intent)
- [ ] Select correct English dialect
- [ ] Add genre-specific terms to personal dictionary
- [ ] Disable rules that conflict with your style guide
Hemingway:
- [ ] Switch to Edit mode
- [ ] Set realistic grade-level target for your genre
- [ ] Test with plain text paste, no rich formatting
Proper setup prevents tool fatigue. You edit faster when software suggests changes you might accept. You preserve voice when tools respect your style choices.
The five-minute investment pays back hours. Configure once, edit smarter forever.
A Proven Workflow for Book-Length Manuscripts
Three tools, one manuscript, zero chaos. Here's how to edit systematically without losing your mind.
Most writers open all three tools at once and bounce between them like ping-pong balls. Bad strategy. Each tool serves a different editing stage. Use them in sequence, not simultaneously.
Work chapter by chapter
Whole manuscripts crash software and overwhelm writers. Break your book into digestible chunks.
Chapter-by-chapter editing prevents:
- Software timeouts and crashes
- Analysis paralysis from too many suggestions
- Losing track of changes across 300 pages
- Inconsistent application of style choices
Start with your strongest chapter. Learn the workflow on familiar ground before tackling problem sections.
In Word: Copy one chapter into a new document. Save it as "Chapter_05_edit_v1.docx." Work in this file, then copy back to your master document.
In Google Docs: Duplicate your manuscript. Collapse all sections except the chapter you're editing. Hide distractions, focus attention.
In Scrivener: Compile individual chapters to Word format. Edit the exported file, then manually apply changes back to your Scrivener project.
First pass: ProWritingAid deep dive
ProWritingAid excels at style analysis and consistency. Run these reports first to catch structural problems before grammar cleanup.
Essential reports for all genres:
- Style: Finds weak sentence starts, passive voice, hidden verbs
- Overused Words: Flags repetitive vocabulary and crutch words
- Readability: Identifies dense paragraphs and complex sentences
- Sticky Sentences: Locates hard-to-follow constructions
- Consistency: Catches spelling variants, hyphenation errors, capitalization mistakes
Fiction bonus reports:
- Pacing: Highlights slow sections with too much dialogue or action
- Dialogue Tags: Finds "said-bookisms" and repetitive tag patterns
Run reports one at a time. Don't open all seven simultaneously. Your brain needs focus, not feature overload.
Accept changes that improve clarity and rhythm. ProWritingAid suggests "She walked quickly" instead of "She walked with haste." Good change. The tool flags "He said softly" as an adverb problem. Maybe keep it if the character never speaks loudly. Context matters.
Leave voice-driven constructions alone. Your protagonist's choppy internal thoughts serve characterization. Your narrator's flowing compound sentences create atmosphere. ProWritingAid doesn't understand literary choice. You do.
Example workflow:
- Open Style report
- Review first 10 suggestions
- Accept changes that clarify meaning
- Reject changes that flatten voice
- Move to next 10 suggestions
- Repeat until chapter complete
Second pass: Grammarly precision work
Grammarly handles mechanical correctness better than ProWritingAid. Switch tools, fresh perspective.
Copy your ProWritingAid-edited chapter into Grammarly. The tool finds different issues because it uses different algorithms. Complementary, not redundant.
Priority fixes:
- Grammar: Subject-verb agreement, pronoun antecedents, modifier placement
- Punctuation: Comma splices, apostrophe errors, quotation mark consistency
- Concision: Wordy constructions, redundant phrases, unnecessary qualifiers
Use the Tone detector to check chapter consistency. Grammarly analyzes emotional register and formality level. Your thriller shouldn't sound academic. Your literary novel shouldn't read like a text message.
Watch for tone drift between chapters. Chapter 3 reads "confident and optimistic." Chapter 4 shows "uncertain and formal." Intentional character development? Great. Accidental inconsistency? Fix it.
Grammarly over-suggests sometimes. Trust your style sheet over the tool. You chose "toward" instead of "towards" for a reason. You prefer minimal comma usage. Override suggestions that conflict with your established voice.
Final pass: Hemingway simplification
Hemingway Editor strips prose to essentials. Use it last, after content and grammar work.
Copy your Grammarly-edited text as plain text. Rich formatting confuses Hemingway's analysis. Focus on sentence structure, not font choices.
Priority targets:
- "Very hard to read" sentences: Usually fixable by breaking into shorter units
- Excessive adverbs: "walked quickly" beats "walked hastily" most times
- Passive voice: "The door was opened" becomes "Sarah opened the door"
- Complex phrases: "make a decision" becomes "decide"
Stop when voice starts to flatten. Hemingway pushes toward newspaper clarity. Fine for thrillers. Wrong for atmospheric literary fiction.
Grade level targets by genre:
- Commercial fiction: 6-8th grade
- Literary fiction: 8-12th grade
- Academic writing: 12th+ grade
- Young adult: 6-8th grade
- Middle grade: 4-6th grade
Hit your target range, not the lowest possible number.
Preserve a clean audit trail
Professional editing requires documentation. Track changes, name files clearly, back up everything.
Use Track Changes in Word or Suggesting mode in Google Docs. Record what you changed and why. Future you will thank present you.
File naming convention:
- Original: "Novel_Chapter_12.docx"
- ProWritingAid pass: "Novel_Chapter_12_PWA_v1.docx"
- Grammarly pass: "Novel_Chapter_12_Grammar_v1.docx"
- Hemingway pass: "Novel_Chapter_12_Final_v1.docx"
Version numbers matter. You'll make multiple passes. "v1," "v2," "v3" prevents confusion.
Comment on major changes. "Removed paragraph - off-topic." "Split long sentence for clarity." "Kept passive voice - maintains POV." Comments explain your reasoning.
Back up to cloud storage after each major pass. Dropbox, Google Drive, OneDrive. Pick one, use it religiously. Hard drives fail. Cloud backups survive.
Timing and rhythm
Budget time realistically:
- ProWritingAid pass: 45-60 minutes per 3,000-word chapter
- Grammarly pass: 20-30 minutes per chapter
- Hemingway pass: 15-20 minutes per chapter
Total: 80-110 minutes per chapter for thorough
Using Reports Like a Pro (What to Fix vs. What to Ignore)
Every editing tool throws suggestions at you like confetti. The difference between amateur and professional editing? Knowing which suggestions deserve attention and which deserve deletion.
Smart editors don't accept every recommendation. They curate. They choose. They protect their voice while polishing their prose.
ProWritingAid: The Swiss Army Knife Approach
ProWritingAid generates more reports than you have time to process. Focus on the ones that matter.
Priority reports that pay dividends
Overused Words catches your verbal tics faster than anything else. We all have crutch words. "Just" appears 47 times in your chapter. "That" shows up 63 times. "Really" peppers every page.
The tool highlights repetition, but context determines fixes. "She was tired" appears five times because your character suffers from insomnia. Deliberate repetition serves the story. "Very tired," "really tired," and "extremely tired" in the same paragraph? Fix it.
Sticky Sentences identifies constructions that slow readers down. These sentences force people to backtrack and reread. Bad sticky sentences confuse. Good sticky sentences create intentional complexity.
Keep sticky sentences when they mirror character confusion or emotional overwhelm. Cut them when they're accidents of poor construction.
Consistency reports catch the stuff that makes you look unprofessional. "Email" in chapter 1, "e-mail" in chapter 12. "Towards" versus "toward." "OK" versus "okay."
Pick one spelling, use it everywhere. ProWritingAid finds the inconsistencies. You make the style choices.
Repeats and Echoes spots word repetition within paragraphs and sentences. "The large house had a large front porch." Easy fix. "The detective detected clues." Harder fix, but necessary.
Some repetition works. "He ran and ran and ran" creates breathless urgency. "I don't know, I don't know, I don't know" shows panic. Intent matters more than frequency.
Readability flags dense paragraphs and complex sentences. Your mystery thriller shouldn't read like a philosophy textbook. Your philosophy textbook doesn't need thriller pacing.
Break up walls of text. Vary sentence length. Create white space. Readers need breathing room.
Fiction extras worth your time
Pacing analyzes dialogue-to-action ratios. Slow scenes contain too much internal monologue or description. Fast scenes pile on too much action without emotional grounding.
Trust the analysis, question the solutions. Your contemplative literary novel needs slow scenes. Your action thriller needs fast ones. Balance within chapters, not across your entire manuscript.
Dialogue Tags hunts down "said-bookisms." Characters don't need to "ejaculate," "opine," or "verbalize" their way through conversations. "Said" works fine. "Asked" handles questions.
Keep colorful tags when they add meaning. "Whispered" tells us something "said" doesn't. "Shouted" matters. "Pontificated" probably doesn't.
Pronoun Starts counts sentences beginning with "He," "She," "It," "They." Too many create monotonous rhythm. Mix up your sentence beginnings.
But don't sacrifice clarity for variety. "The tall, dark stranger crossed the room" beats "Crossing the room, the tall, dark stranger" if the first version flows better in context.
What to ignore with confidence
Sentence variety complaints when you write short sentences for effect. Hemingway wrote short sentences. So did Cormac McCarthy. Ignore the tool when choppy rhythm serves your purpose.
Fragment warnings for dialogue and internal thought. People think in fragments. They speak in incomplete sentences. "Because reasons" makes perfect sense in the right character's voice.
Grammar suggestions that destroy dialect. Your character drops g's off "-ing" words. Your narrator uses regional speech patterns. ProWritingAid wants standard English. You want authentic voice.
Grammarly: The Grammar Police with Style Sense
Grammarly excels at mechanical correctness. Use it to catch errors, not to rewrite your voice.
Priority fixes that matter
Subject-verb agreement errors make you look careless. "The group of writers were meeting" should be "was meeting." "Neither the author nor the editors was happy" should be "were happy."
These mistakes distract readers from your story. Fix them all.
Modifier placement problems confuse meaning. "Walking down the street, the building caught his attention" suggests the building was walking. "As he walked down the street, the building caught his attention" clarifies.
Punctuation consistency within dialogue, quotations, and lists. Pick comma rules and stick to them. Grammarly catches the deviations you miss.
Concision suggestions that eliminate wordy constructions without changing meaning. "In order to" becomes "to." "Due to the fact that" becomes "because." "Make a decision" becomes "decide."
Clear writing beats clever writing every time.
The Tone detector: Your consistency check
Grammarly's Tone feature analyzes emotional register and formality level across your text. Your romantic comedy shouldn't suddenly sound academic. Your historical fiction shouldn't slip into contemporary slang.
Watch for unintentional tone shifts between chapters. Chapter 5 reads "confident and conversational." Chapter 6 shows "uncertain and formal." Unless your protagonist underwent major character development, investigate the difference.
Match tone to genre expectations. Literary fiction accommodates complex, formal language. Beach reads demand accessible, conversational style. Know your audience.
Style choices you should override
Oxford comma preferences when you've chosen a house style. If your style sheet says "no Oxford commas," ignore Grammarly's insistence on adding them.
Em-dash spacing suggestions that contradict your chosen format. Chicago style wants unspaced em-dashes. AP style wants spaced ones. Follow your guide, not the algorithm.
Formality recommendations that flatten your voice. Grammarly pushes toward corporate-friendly language. Your indie novel doesn't need corporate approval.
Hemingway: The Minimalist's Best Friend
Hemingway Editor strips prose to its skeleton. Useful for overwriters. Dangerous for atmospheric writers.
Priority targets worth addressing
"Very hard to read" sentences usually need breaking up. Readers shouldn't need three attempts to parse your meaning. Split compound constructions. Eliminate unnecessary clauses.
Before: "The detective, who had been working the case for three months without any significant leads, finally discovered a crucial piece of evidence that would change everything about how he understood the crime."
After: "The detective had been working the case for three months without significant leads. Then he discovered crucial evidence. Everything about the crime suddenly made sense."
Excessive adverbs weaken strong verbs. "Walked quickly" beats "rushed" sometimes, but "sprinted" beats both. "Said softly" often means "whispered."
Check every adverb. Does it add meaning or pad word count?
Passive voice when active voice creates stronger sentences. "The door was opened by Sarah" becomes "Sarah opened the door."
Keep passive voice when the actor doesn't matter or when you want to emphasize the action's recipient. "Mistakes were made" deflects responsibility. "The house was built in 1847" focuses on the house, not unknown builders.
Nominalizations turn verbs into nouns and suck energy from sentences. "Make a decision" becomes "decide." "Come to a realization" becomes "realize."
Grade level: Guide, not gospel
Hemingway assigns grade levels to your writing. Take them as rough guidance, not absolute requirements.
Commercial fiction targets 6th-8th grade reading level. Accessible but not childish. Literary fiction sustains 8th-12th grade complexity. Readers expect richer language and more complex ideas.
Academic writing operates above 12th grade. Normal for scholarly work. Fatal for popular fiction.
Don't chase the lowest possible grade level. Chase clarity and appropriate complexity for your audience.
When to stop editing
Hemingway pushes toward newspaper clarity. Fine for some genres. Wrong for others.
Stop when sentences lose their music. Stop when character voice flattens. Stop when atmospheric description disappears.
Your Gothic novel needs complex, flowing sentences. Your psychological thriller benefits from fragmented, anxious prose. Your romance wants emotional, sensual language.
Tools serve writers. Writers don't serve tools.
The goal: Clean prose that preserves your unique voice. These reports help you find problems. Your judgment determines solutions. Edit smart, not blindly.
Preserve Voice While You Self-Edit
The biggest danger in using editing tools isn't that they'll miss errors. The danger is that they'll strip away everything that makes your writing yours.
These tools push toward a bland, corporate middle ground. Clean prose. Correct grammar. Zero personality. Your job? Take their mechanical advice while protecting the soul of your work.
Voice is what separates your thriller from the thousand other thrillers published this year. Voice is why readers buy your second book. Voice is not negotiable.
Build Your Literary Fortress: The "Do-Not-Change" List
Start every editing session by identifying what stays untouchable. Create a running list of words, phrases, and constructions that define your story's voice.
Character dialect tops the list. Your Brooklyn detective says "cawfee" and "tawk." Your Southern belle drops final g's and stretches vowels. Your fantasy dwarf speaks in clipped, formal sentences. These speech patterns create authenticity.
Grammarly wants to "fix" dialect. ProWritingAid flags "nonstandard" grammar. Hemingway pushes for simple sentence structure. Ignore them all.
Add dialect words to your custom dictionaries. "Ain't," "gonna," "shoulda," and "woulda" belong in your character's mouth. The red squiggles lie.
Catchphrases and verbal tics deserve protection too. Your detective always says "Here's the thing." Your vampire uses "indeed" in every conversation. Your teenager peppers speech with "like" and "whatever."
Repetitive? Yes. Realistic? Absolutely. People repeat themselves. Characters should too.
Worldbuilding terminology needs special attention in fantasy and sci-fi. "Muggle," "lightsaber," "frak," "shiny." These invented words carry meaning for your readers. They establish setting and culture.
Tools flag these as errors or suggest "clearer" alternatives. Stand firm. Your invented curse words beat generic replacements every time.
Technical jargon deserves consideration case by case. Medical thrillers need accurate terminology. Police procedurals require proper protocol language. Legal dramas demand courtroom precision.
Keep jargon when accuracy matters more than accessibility. Cut it when it stops the story cold.
The Art of Strategic Acceptance
Not every suggestion deserves rejection. Smart editing means choosing improvements that enhance voice rather than diminish it.
Accept suggestions that sharpen meaning without changing tone. "He moved quickly toward the door" becomes "He rushed toward the door." Same urgency, stronger verb.
Accept fixes that eliminate confusion. Unclear pronoun references frustrate readers. Misplaced modifiers create unintentional comedy. Fix these problems.
Accept consistency corrections that don't alter meaning. "Email" versus "e-mail." "Toward" versus "towards." Pick one spelling, use it everywhere.
Reject suggestions that flatten emotional impact. "She was devastated" carries different weight than "She was sad." The tool prefers simple words. Your character needs precise emotions.
Reject changes that eliminate subtext. "Fine" in dialogue often means anything but fine. Context matters more than dictionary definitions.
Reject alterations that break rhythm. Poetry lives in prose too. "In the beginning was the Word" sounds better than "The Word existed initially." Sacred rhythm trumps plain language.
The Dialogue Test: Trust Your Ears
Editing tools treat dialogue like exposition. Wrong approach entirely.
People don't speak in complete sentences. They interrupt themselves. They trail off mid-thought. They use fragments, repetition, and grammatically incorrect constructions.
"Well, I... I mean, what I was trying to say was..." sounds natural. "I intended to express..." sounds robotic.
Read every conversation aloud after editing. Better yet, read it aloud to someone else. Natural dialogue flows. Over-corrected dialogue stumbles.
Listen for speech patterns that distinguish characters. Your physics professor uses longer sentences than your kindergarten teacher. Your gangster speaks differently than your priest. Age, education, region, and personality shape speech.
Tools often suggest similar "improvements" for different characters. Resist. Voice variety keeps readers engaged.
Contractions matter enormously. "I will not tolerate this behavior" versus "I won't tolerate this behavior." The first sounds formal or angry. The second sounds conversational. Choose based on character and situation.
Regional speech patterns deserve respect. "I'm fixing to leave" means "I'm about to leave" in parts of the South. "I might could help" combines modal verbs in ways that make grammar checkers weep. Keep authentic regional voice.
Genre Expectations: Know Your Audience's Comfort Zone
Different genres support different levels of complexity. Match your prose style to reader expectations.
Thrillers thrive on momentum. Short sentences. Punchy paragraphs. Active voice. Minimal description. Readers want to turn pages fast.
Literary fiction rewards rich language. Complex sentences work when they serve meaning. Metaphorical language adds depth. Readers expect to slow down and savor.
Romance needs emotional resonance. Sensual description matters. Internal monologue creates intimacy. Physical reaction beats abstract emotion.
Fantasy and sci-fi require worldbuilding through language. Invented words establish setting. Formal speech patterns suggest different cultures. Description creates atmosphere readers can't Google.
Historical fiction demands period-appropriate language without incomprehensibility. "Thee" and "thou" for medieval settings. Formal constructions for Victorian era. Balance authenticity with accessibility.
Young adult fiction needs accessible complexity. Shorter sentences than literary fiction. More dynamic than picture books. Emotional directness over subtle subtext.
Commercial fiction sits in the middle ground. Clean prose that moves fast. Accessible vocabulary with occasional flourishes. Wide appeal without dumbing down.
Know your target reader's expectations. Honor them while maintaining your unique voice.
Lock In Your Style Bible
Consistency creates professionalism. Build a one-page style sheet and stick to it throughout your manuscript.
Numbers: Spell out one through ten, use numerals for 11 and up. Or spell out one through ninety-nine. Or use numerals throughout. Pick one rule, apply it everywhere.
Time formats: "3:00 PM," "3:00 p.m.," or "three o'clock in the afternoon." Choose consistency over correctness.
Internal thought: Italics, quotation marks, or plain text. First person or third person. Past or present tense. Lock in these decisions before chapter 1.
Dialogue punctuation: "'Hi,' she said" or "'Hi', she said." Oxford comma or no Oxford comma. Em-dash spacing or no spacing. Make one choice for the entire book.
Capitalization for titles, relationships, and invented terms. "Detective Smith" or "detective Smith." "Mom" or "mom" when used as names. "Force" or "force" when referring to Star Wars powers.
Document these decisions. Tools will suggest different approaches in different chapters. Your style sheet overrides their suggestions.
Hyphenation deserves special attention. "Twenty-one," "twenty one," or "twentyone." "E-mail," "email," or "Email." Modern usage shifts constantly. Pick what feels right for your story's timeline and stick with it.
Brand names and proper nouns need consistency too. "iPhone" not "Iphone." "McDonald's" not "McDonalds." "New York" not "New york." Small details matter to readers.
The Voice Preservation Mindset
Think of editing tools as enthusiastic but inexperienced assistants. They spot problems you miss. They catch errors that embarrass you. They don't understand art, subtext, or intentional rule-breaking.
Your job: Mine their suggestions for gold while ignoring the fool's gold.
Perfect grammar serves the story, not the other way around. Clear communication beats rigid rule-following. Authentic voice trumps algorithmic approval.
Edit with confidence. Accept improvements that strengthen your work. Reject changes that weaken your voice. Trust your instincts over software suggestions.
Your readers fell in love with your voice before any editing tool touched it. Polish that voice. Don't replace it.
The goal: Clean, consistent prose that sounds unmistakably like you. Tools help you get there. They don't get to decide when you've arrived.
Advanced Tips: Integrations, Shortcuts, and Collaboration
You've mastered the basics. Now let's talk about working smarter, not harder.
The difference between amateur and professional editing isn't just skill. It's workflow. Pros know how to chain tools together, handle massive documents without crashes, and collaborate without losing their minds.
Native Integrations: Work Where You Write
Stop copying and pasting between applications. Native integrations save hours and prevent version control disasters.
ProWritingAid shines brightest inside your writing software. Install the Word add-in and run reports without leaving your manuscript. The Google Docs extension works almost as smoothly. Scrivener users get a dedicated desktop app that handles complex projects without breaking a sweat.
Click "ProWritingAid" in your toolbar. Run your reports. Accept or reject suggestions inline. No export, no import, no mess.
Grammarly follows the same philosophy. The Word integration catches errors as you type. Real-time suggestions appear in the margin. The Google Docs extension provides similar functionality for cloud-based writers.
Hemingway Editor plays by different rules. No native integrations exist. No problem. Copy your edited text from ProWritingAid or Grammarly and paste it into Hemingway's web interface. Run your final readability pass. Copy the results back.
This workflow prevents the amateur mistake of editing the same paragraph in three different applications and forgetting which version contains your latest changes.
Desktop apps beat web versions for serious work. ProWritingAid's desktop software runs faster and handles longer documents. Grammarly's desktop app works offline. Web versions serve best for quick checks and short pieces.
Privacy matters more for some writers than others. Desktop applications keep your manuscript on your machine. Web-based tools upload text to company servers. Choose based on your comfort level and contract requirements.
Chunk Your Way to Success
Editing 80,000 words in one session overwhelms both you and your software. Work smarter by breaking your manuscript into digestible pieces.
The magic number? 1,000 to 3,000 words per editing session. One scene. One chapter. One section.
Large documents slow down every tool. Word struggles with track changes in massive files. Google Docs becomes sluggish with complex formatting. ProWritingAid reports take forever to generate.
Small chunks run fast. Reports generate in seconds instead of minutes. Software stays responsive. You maintain focus instead of drowning in suggestions.
Chapter-by-chapter editing offers additional benefits. You spot consistency problems between sections. Character voice stays distinct. Pacing issues become obvious when you edit scenes individually.
Export clean versions after each editing pass. "Chapter_05_PWA_complete.docx" before you move to Grammarly. "Chapter_05_Grammarly_complete.docx" before Hemingway. "Chapter_05_Final.docx" when you finish.
Version naming prevents catastrophic mistakes. You always know which file contains your latest work. You never accidentally edit an old version.
Cloud backup happens automatically when you save frequently. Google Drive, Dropbox, OneDrive. Pick one. Use it religiously.
Scrivener users have additional options. Compile individual chapters for editing. Run tools on compiled versions. Import changes back into your master project. Scrivener's snapshot feature preserves pre-editing versions for comparison.
Professional File Sharing: Clean First, Track Second
Collaboration requires strategy. Amateur writers send messy files. Professionals send clean manuscripts with thoughtful formatting.
Accept all mechanical changes before sending to human editors. Grammar fixes, punctuation corrections, spelling errors. Clean these up first.
Your developmental editor doesn't need to see that you changed "their" to "they're" in paragraph twelve. Focus their attention on story structure, character development, and plot holes.
Line editors care about word choice, sentence rhythm, and clarity. Send them clean text with mechanical errors already fixed. Let them focus on the art of language.
Copy editors want to see your final prose without formatting distractions. Export to clean Word documents. Remove highlighting, comments from previous rounds, and unnecessary styling.
Track Changes becomes your friend during collaboration. Turn it on before making changes suggested by editors. Send tracked versions back for approval.
Comment threads help explain your reasoning. "Kept this dialogue tag because it shows character nervousness." "Changed this scene break for better pacing." Communication prevents misunderstandings.
File naming for collaboration requires extra precision. "Novel_Title_Dev_Edit_Round_1.docx" tells everyone exactly what they're looking at. "Novel_Title_Line_Edit_Author_Response.docx" shows your changes clearly.
Multiple editors mean multiple file streams. Keep master versions separate from editor-specific drafts. Merge changes carefully. Never edit two versions simultaneously.
Progress Tracking: Your Personal Analytics
ProWritingAid's Summary report functions like fitness tracking for your manuscript. Export it after each major editing round. Watch your writing improve over time.
Word count stays obvious. Average sentence length shows style evolution. Readability scores track accessibility improvements. Grammar index measures mechanical progress.
Consistency tracking matters more than you think. Chapter 3 uses "email." Chapter 15 uses "e-mail." Chapter 27 uses "Email." Summary reports catch these problems before readers notice them.
Overused word tracking prevents embarrassing repetition. Your thriller hero "grimaced" forty-seven times. Your romance heroine "sighed" sixty-two times. Fix patterns before they become distracting.
Export summary data to spreadsheets for deeper analysis. Track changes between drafts. Identify chapters that need additional attention. Spot trends that suggest bigger problems.
Fiction writers benefit from pacing reports. Slow chapters need tightening. Fast chapters need breathing room. Visual data helps balance story rhythm.
Dialogue tag reports show speech attribution patterns. "Said" appears 200 times. "Asked" appears 50 times. Everything else totals 15 instances. Good ratio for most fiction.
Privacy and Security: Professional Paranoia
Not all manuscripts belong in the cloud. Understand what happens to your text when you use web-based editing tools.
Terms of service vary between providers. Some companies claim no rights to your content. Others reserve broad usage rights. Read the fine print before uploading your novel.
Desktop applications offer maximum privacy. Your text never leaves your computer. Processing happens locally. No internet connection required for basic functionality.
Hybrid approaches work for cautious writers. Use desktop apps for sensitive projects. Use web versions for blog posts, articles, and less sensitive content.
Corporate and freelance writers face additional constraints. Client contracts often specify data handling requirements. Government work requires special security measures. Know your obligations before choosing tools.
Separate editing accounts help compartmentalize work. Personal account for your novel. Business account for client projects. Different email addresses prevent cross-contamination.
Regular data export prevents vendor lock-in. Download your custom dictionaries monthly. Export style sheets and settings. Save local copies of important reports.
Two-factor authentication protects web-based accounts. Enable it everywhere possible. Use strong, unique passwords for each service. Password managers make this painless.
Workflow Integration: The Professional System
Combine these techniques into a repeatable process. Professional writers follow systems, not inspiration.
Start each editing session by opening the correct file version. Check the filename. Verify the last modified date. Avoid editing old drafts by accident.
Enable track changes before making modifications. Future you will thank present you for this discipline.
Run editing tools in sequence. ProWritingAid for deep analysis. Grammarly for mechanical cleanup. Hemingway for final polish.
Save and backup after each tool. Computer crashes happen. Power outages occur. Save frequently, backup automatically.
Export clean versions before sharing. Remove comments, resolve tracked changes, strip unnecessary formatting.
Name files descriptively. Include dates, version numbers, and editing stages. "Thriller_Novel_Ch12_PWA_2024-03-15_v2.docx" tells the whole story.
Document your decisions. Style sheet updates, character name spellings, world-building terminology. Consistency requires record-keeping.
Review progress weekly. Export summary reports. Compare statistics between versions. Celebrate improvements, identify problem areas.
The goal? Efficient editing that improves your manuscript without destroying your sanity. These tools serve you, not the other way around.
Master the workflow. Protect your voice. Ship better books.
Frequently Asked Questions
In what order should I run ProWritingAid, Grammarly and Hemingway on a chapter?
Use a staged sequence: ProWritingAid first for deep pattern analysis (style, Overused Words, Sticky Sentences and consistency), Grammarly second for mechanical precision (subject–verb agreement, punctuation, concision) and Hemingway last to tighten readability and cadence (grade‑level targets and very hard‑to‑read sentences). Follow a chapter‑by‑chapter editing workflow so each tool processes a manageable chunk.
What quick configuration should I do before I start editing?
Spend five minutes setting document type and readability goals in ProWritingAid, configure Grammarly Goals (audience, formality, domain and intent) and choose the correct English dialect, and paste plain text into Hemingway’s Edit mode with an appropriate grade‑level target for your genre. Add character names, invented terms and house style choices to each tool’s custom dictionary so they stop flagging deliberate choices.
How do I preserve character voice and dialect when tools keep flagging them?
Create a "do‑not‑change" list in your style bible and add dialect terms, catchphrases and worldbuilding vocabulary to custom dictionaries. Override or reject suggestions that homogenise speech and read dialogue aloud after each pass — if a line sounds true to the character, keep it even when a checker suggests a "correction".
How large should my editing chunks be and how much time will each pass take?
Work in 1,000–3,000 word chunks (one scene or one chapter) to keep tools responsive. Budget roughly 45–60 minutes per chapter for a ProWritingAid pass, 20–30 minutes for Grammarly, and 15–20 minutes for Hemingway — about 80–110 minutes total for a thorough edit, plus time for applying and reviewing tracked changes.
What is the best way to manage versions and collaborate with editors?
Use Track Changes in Word or Suggesting mode in Google Docs, keep a clear file‑naming convention (for example Novel_Chapter_12_PWA_v1.docx → Novel_Chapter_12_Grammar_v1.docx → Novel_Chapter_12_Final_v1.docx), and add comment threads to explain major decisions. Send collaborators a clean copy for each stage so editors focus on their remit — developmental editors on structure, line editors on language, copyeditors on consistency.
Should I use desktop or web versions for sensitive manuscripts?
If confidentiality is a concern, favour desktop apps or local processing where your text never leaves your machine; web versions upload text to company servers and have varying terms of service. Use two‑factor authentication, export regular local backups, and read privacy policies — a hybrid approach (desktop for sensitive projects, web for non‑confidential work) often works best.
Which reports should I prioritise and which suggestions can I safely ignore?
Prioritise ProWritingAid reports like Overused Words, Sticky Sentences and Consistency for manuscript‑level patterns; use Grammarly for subject–verb agreement, modifier placement and punctuation; use Hemingway to break "very hard to read" sentences and remove excessive adverbs. Ignore fragment warnings for intentional dialogue, sentence‑variety flags when choppy rhythm is a stylistic choice, and passive‑voice alerts when passive serves plot or POV.
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