How To Budget For Book Editing (With Real Examples)
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Clarify Your Editing Needs and Baseline Budget
Money goes farther when you know what problem you are paying to solve. Start there.
Name the problem
- Big‑picture structure. Developmental editing addresses plot, character arcs, pacing, POV, theme, and market fit. Expect a diagnostic letter, margin notes, and a call.
- Sentence flow and voice. Line editing shapes rhythm, clarity, and tone. Expect examples and rewrites at the sentence level.
- Correctness and consistency. Copyediting fixes grammar, usage, continuity, and style sheet issues.
- Final typos after layout. Proofreading catches lingering errors on page proofs.
Quick test:
- Readers feel lost or bored by the middle. Choose developmental.
- Readers grasp the story yet stumble over dense or awkward sentences. Choose line.
- Readers enjoy the voice and plot yet flag comma misuse, hyphenation, or timeline slips. Choose copyediting.
- Book is designed and ready for print or upload. Choose proofreading.
Consider lighter options first
An editorial assessment, also called a manuscript critique, gives a high‑level diagnosis without heavy margin work. Think a focused letter and a call. Strong choice for early drafts or tight budgets. You revise, then book deeper work only where needed. For many writers, this path saves thousands and shortens later edits.
When to pick an assessment:
- You want clarity on stakes, beats, and character drive.
- You plan major rewrites and do not need sentence‑level coaching yet.
- You want a roadmap before investing in a full developmental edit.
Match service to your publishing path
Self‑publishing usually means the full stack: developmental, then line, then copyediting, then proofreading on designed pages. That sequence builds quality in layers and prevents expensive rework.
Querying authors often lead with an assessment or a developmental edit. Agents read for concept, execution, and voice. A sharp structure and a strong opening lift requests. Save line and copy work for later, unless feedback points to sentence‑level problems.
Hybrid paths exist. For example, assessment now, partial line edit on the opening 50 pages before a conference, then copyediting once a deal or a firm plan sits in place.
Right‑size by draft readiness
Listen to early readers before you hire. Their notes reveal where money should go.
- Big problems flagged. Fund structural work first. A clear plan at the top prevents paying twice to polish scenes that will get cut.
- Structure holds. Shift spend to line and copyediting. Smooth the reading experience and lock down consistency.
- Mixed signals. Ask for a paid sample. Ten to fifteen thousand words, or the opening plus the midpoint. You will see how an editor responds and where hours will land.
A simple pre‑edit checklist helps:
- One‑line summary of each beat: inciting event, first plot turn, midpoint, crisis, climax.
- Scene inventory with purpose and a noted turn.
- Character goal, obstacle, and outcome for each major scene.
- Timeline notes for days and weeks passing on the page.
Set a baseline budget
Pick a budget band before requesting quotes. Low, Mid, High. Use a simple formula: Cost equals word count times per‑word rate. Then run three scenarios for the services you need.
Example steps for a 75,000‑word novel:
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Developmental assessment
- Rate range 0.01 to 0.02 per word.
- Low band: 75,000 × 0.01 equals 750.
- Mid band: 75,000 × 0.015 equals 1,125.
- High band: 75,000 × 0.02 equals 1,500.
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Full developmental edit
- Rate range 0.03 to 0.08 per word.
- Low band: 75,000 × 0.03 equals 2,250.
- Mid band: 75,000 × 0.05 equals 3,750.
- High band: 75,000 × 0.08 equals 6,000.
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Line editing
- Rate range 0.03 to 0.07 per word.
- Low band: 2,250.
- Mid band: 3,000.
- High band: 5,250.
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Copyediting
- Rate range 0.02 to 0.04 per word.
- Low band: 1,500.
- Mid band: 2,250.
- High band: 3,000.
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Proofreading
- Rate range 0.01 to 0.02 per word.
- Low band: 750.
- Mid band: 1,125.
- High band: 1,500.
Plug your own word count and rates. Write three package totals. For example:
- Assessment plus copyedit plus proofread.
- Developmental plus line, then copyedit later.
- Line plus copyedit for a structurally sound draft.
A mini exercise to lock this down
Grab a sheet of paper.
- Write your goal in one line. Query‑ready. Indie launch in Q4. Agent submission after conference.
- Circle the biggest pain point from recent feedback.
- Pick the likely service tier using the tests above.
- Note your word count.
- Pick a Low, Mid, and High rate from the ranges above.
- Multiply and list three totals.
Now you have a budget band and a service plan. Quotes will still vary, yet this prep anchors the conversation. You speak to editors with clear aims, a realistic range, and a request that matches your stage. Editors respond faster. You get better work for the same money.
Understand Pricing Models and Typical Ranges (USD)
You are not buying an edit. You are buying hours, judgment, and deliverables. Pricing reflects all three. Learn the models, then compare on the same footing.
How editors price
- Per word. Easiest to compare. Rate multiplied by your word count equals the fee.
- Hourly. Useful for undefined scope. Harder to predict total cost.
- Flat project fee. Set price for agreed scope. Often based on a sample and a clear brief.
Always ask for the per‑word equivalent. It levels the field.
- Hourly to per word: hourly rate divided by words per hour.
- Example: $60 per hour, 1,500 words per hour for copyediting equals 60 ÷ 1,500, about $0.04 per word.
- Project fee to per word: total fee divided by word count.
- Example: $2,400 for 80,000 words equals 2,400 ÷ 80,000, $0.03 per word.
If an editor declines to give a per‑word equivalent, request a tight scope with a cap, or move on.
Typical per‑word ranges
- Editorial assessment or manuscript critique: $0.01 to $0.02.
- Developmental editing: $0.03 to $0.08.
- Line or stylistic editing: $0.03 to $0.07.
- Copyediting: $0.02 to $0.04.
- Proofreading: $0.01 to $0.02.
Rates vary by genre, complexity, and timeline. The middle of each range fits most trade fiction and general nonfiction. Academic work, heavy jargon, citations, and translation often sit higher.
Add‑ons that affect cost
- Rush schedules. Expect plus 20 to 50 percent for compressed timelines.
- Heavy‑edit surcharge. Rough drafts take longer. More fixes, more comments, more queries.
- Fact‑checking or citations. Common in nonfiction. Footnotes and references add hours.
- Second‑pass reviews. A follow‑up sweep after your revisions.
- Page‑proof checks on designed PDFs. Proofreading on the laid‑out pages.
You control many of these. Book early. Deliver clean files. Decide up front whether you want a second pass.
Deliverables that change scope
What you receive drives price. Ask for clarity on deliverables before you sign.
- Edit letter length. Two pages, or fifteen pages with a scene map and examples.
- Margin comments. A light pass with high‑level notes, or dense in‑text commentary.
- Scene maps or outlines. Helpful for complex plots and series.
- Style sheet detail. From a simple word list to a Chicago‑based sheet with decisions on hyphenation, numerals, capitalization, and recurring terms.
- Calls and support windows. One call, or a call plus thirty days of Q&A.
Two quotes at the same per‑word rate might have different deliverables. One includes a 60‑minute debrief and a detailed style sheet. The other offers email support for a week and a shorter letter. Weigh the package, not only the number.
Quick estimate examples
- 80,000 words at $0.03 for a copyedit equals $2,400.
- 60,000 words at $0.05 for a line edit equals $3,000.
- 100,000 words at $0.06 for developmental editing equals $6,000.
A few more for context:
- 50,000 words at $0.02 for a copyedit equals $1,000.
- 90,000 words at $0.015 for proofreading equals $1,350.
- 75,000 words at $0.04 for a line edit equals $3,000.
If a quote arrives as hourly, convert it. Example: $70 per hour for proofreading, 2,000 words per hour, per‑word equals 70 ÷ 2,000, $0.035. That sits closer to copyediting rates, so ask what level of polish is included.
A quick story from the inbox
Two authors, same 85,000‑word thriller. Quote A: $0.05 per word for line editing, includes a style sheet, Track Changes, and a 45‑minute call. Quote B: $2,550 flat fee for line editing, no details. Divide B by the word count, per‑word equals 2,550 ÷ 85,000, $0.03. Cheaper, yes, but scope is thin. The author who pushed for a detailed deliverables list learned that B excluded rewrites and included minimal commentary. Price aligned with service once both sat side by side.
Build a simple spreadsheet
Open a sheet. Set columns for:
- Service
- Word count
- Per‑word rate
- Subtotal
- Timeline
- Deliverables and notes
Enter your scenarios.
Example rows for a 60,000‑word novel:
- Developmental assessment, 60,000 × $0.015, $900, 3 weeks, 6 to 8 page letter plus a 30‑minute call.
- Line edit, 60,000 × $0.05, $3,000, 3 weeks, heavy comments plus sentence‑level rewrites on awkward passages.
- Copyedit, 60,000 × $0.03, $1,800, 2 weeks, style sheet plus queries.
- Proofread, 60,000 × $0.015, $900, 1 week, PDF proof check.
Add a total row for each package. Color rows by priority. Note availability dates and deposit terms. Now you see trade‑offs in dollars and days, not vibes.
A mini exercise to compare quotes
- Gather three quotes for the same service level.
- Convert each to per‑word.
- List deliverables next to the rate.
- Circle the quote with the best mix of rate, scope, and timeline.
- Ask one follow‑up question per quote. For line edits, request a 1,000‑word paid sample on your opening scene. For copyedits, request a style sheet sample.
Your goal is not the lowest number. Your goal is the right level of work at a price that fits your plan. Get the math straight, then hire the brain you trust.
Real Examples: Editing Budgets at Different Levels
Numbers feel abstract until you tie them to a real plan. Here are five budgets I see often, with choices that keep the work focused and the spend under control.
Example A: Query‑ready 80k novel on a tight budget
Goal: polish for agents without draining savings.
Package:
- Editorial assessment at $0.015 per word. 80,000 × 0.015 = $1,200. You receive a 6 to 8 page letter with priorities and examples. No in‑text edits.
- Light copyedit at $0.02 per word. 80,000 × 0.02 = $1,600. Fixes grammar, punctuation, consistency. Light queries on clarity.
- Proofreading at $0.01 per word. 80,000 × 0.01 = $800. Final pass for typos and stray formatting.
Total: $3,600. Add a 20 percent buffer, $720, if you might want a second look at the opening.
Levers:
- Trim 5,000 words before quotes and save $50 on proofing and $100 on copyediting. Small cuts add up.
- Ask for a paid sample copyedit on the first 1,000 words. Confirm level before you book.
- If the assessment reveals major structure work, pause the copyedit. Revise, then re‑scope.
Timeline: 6 to 8 weeks across two rounds of revision.
Anecdote: Dana trimmed a thin subplot after the assessment. Cost dropped by $90, and the query pages snapped into focus.
Example B: Indie 90k epic fantasy, premium quality for self‑publishing
Goal: publish wide with pro polish equal to a trad release.
Package:
- Developmental editing at $0.06 per word. 90,000 × 0.06 = $5,400. Includes a 15 to 20 page letter, scene map, and one consult.
- Line editing at $0.05 per word. 90,000 × 0.05 = $4,500. Deep sentence work for voice, clarity, rhythm.
- Copyediting at $0.03 per word. 90,000 × 0.03 = $2,700. Style sheet aligned to Chicago. Terminology and names tracked across the series.
- Proofreading at $0.015 per word. 90,000 × 0.015 = $1,350. On the designed PDF, so layout errors surface.
Total: $13,950.
Levers:
- Schedule 3 to 4 months. Book each slot early to avoid rush premiums.
- Ask for a series style sheet if a sequel is planned. Saves time later.
- If budget tightens, shift line edits to the first 25,000 words and to tricky chapters with new POVs. Keep full copyedit and proof.
Deliverables to confirm:
- Developmental letter length and whether it includes scene‑level suggestions.
- Line edit approach on dialogue tags, interiority, and worldbuilding terms.
- Proofreading on PDF with a list of checks for widows, orphans, and headers.
Example C: 45k business nonfiction, mid‑range budget
Goal: sharpen structure and authority for a speaking and consulting platform.
Package:
- Developmental edit at $0.05 per word. 45,000 × 0.05 = $2,250. Diagnostic plus solutions. Chapter order, case studies, reader promises, and action steps.
- Copyediting at $0.03 per word. 45,000 × 0.03 = $1,350. Consistency on headings, bullets, lists, and branded terms. Chicago base with company exceptions noted.
- Proofreading at $0.015 per word. 45,000 × 0.015 = $675.
Possible extras:
- Permissions or fact‑check support. $300 to $800, based on citations, quotes, and charts.
- Front matter and back matter polish. A few hours for index cards or a resources list.
Total: $4,575 to $5,075.
Levers:
- Supply complete references and figure captions in one file. Saves hours.
- Flag any regulated claims in advance. Fewer back‑and‑forth emails, fewer billed minutes.
- Request a sample style sheet entry so you see how terms, numerals, and capitalization will be handled.
Mini exercise: list your three most repeated terms. Provide your preferred versions up front. Editors use that list to lock style, which shortens queries.
Example D: 35k romance novella, shoestring plan
Goal: a clean, fun read for digital release, with smart spending.
Package:
- Manuscript critique at $0.012 per word. 35,000 × 0.012 = $420. A focused letter on beats, chemistry, and conflict.
- Copyedit at $0.02 per word. 35,000 × 0.02 = $700. Consistency on names, timeline, and heat‑level language.
- Proofread at $0.01 per word. 35,000 × 0.01 = $350.
Total: $1,470.
Levers:
- Use critique partners for line‑level prose before copyediting. Arrive with cleaner pages and avoid a heavy edit surcharge.
- Provide a trope and subgenre note to the editor. Saves time on style choices.
- If you plan a series, ask the copyeditor to start a light series style sheet. Minimal extra time, strong future value.
Anecdote: Priya’s group flagged head‑hopping in two scenes. She fixed POV before hiring, which kept the copyedit light and within the quoted level.
Example E: 1,000‑word picture book
Goal: precise rhythm and page turns. Few words, high scrutiny.
Package with common minimums:
- Developmental critique. $250 to $400. Notes on concept, structure, and read‑aloud flow.
- Combined line and copyedit. $200 to $400. Meter, repetition, pronoun clarity, and page breaks.
- Proofread. $75 to $150. Final typo sweep on the designed PDF.
Total: $525 to $950.
Levers:
- Hire a children’s specialist. Picture books demand tight scansion and age‑appropriate vocabulary.
- Send a page‑break mockup with your preferred page turns. Less guesswork, less backtracking.
- Hold off on art until the text is stable. Re‑flow costs more than you think once the illustrator starts.
How to mix and match
These are patterns, not cages. Use them to build a plan that fits your draft.
- Strong structure, thin sentences. Skip the assessment and put money into line editing, then copyedit and proof.
- Solid lines, messy plot. Fund the developmental stage first. Delay line work until the beats land.
- Money tight. Pick copyediting plus proofreading for correctness. Add a short consult to steer revisions between passes.
- Uncertain scope. Pay for a sample edit and a diagnostic. Lock the level before full booking.
Action: pick the example closest to your project. Swap one service if your needs differ. Recalculate totals using your word count and the ranges above. Then book dates and set aside a 10 to 20 percent buffer for surprises. Your future self will thank you.
Plan Timeline, Phasing, and Cash Flow
Time and money run the show. Plan both, or the calendar slips and the bill swells. A clear sequence keeps every round focused. A cash plan keeps stress low.
Phase the work
Sequence edits so your brain has room to revise between them.
- Assessment, then revise.
- Developmental, then revise.
- Line, then copy.
- Proof on designed pages.
Book each slot early to avoid rush fees.
A simple timeline for an 80,000‑word novel:
- Editorial assessment, 2 weeks. Revision window, 3 weeks.
- Developmental edit, 4 weeks. Revision window, 4 weeks.
- Line edit, 3 weeks.
- Copyedit, 2 weeks.
- Proofreading, 1 week on the PDF.
That schedule fills three to four months. Leave white space for life. One tough chapter has a way of eating a weekend.
Quick check: if the revision window looks short, extend before booking. A packed calendar breeds rushed changes, which raise costs later.
Know the payment schedule
Most editors ask for a deposit to hold dates. Anywhere from 25 to 50 percent. Balance due at handoff. Longer projects often allow milestones. Ask early.
A common pattern:
- Deposit to reserve the slot.
- Midpoint payment on delivery of a partial.
- Final payment on handoff.
Set reminders when you sign. Missed payments push dates, which often brings rush fees when you try to catch up.
Control follow‑up time
Questions help. Scattershot questions drain time and money. Batch them.
- Read the edit letter twice before emailing.
- Park questions in one document with page numbers.
- Book a single debrief call. Thirty to sixty minutes.
- Agree on a short Q and A window, for example ten days after delivery.
Result, fewer stray emails, clearer answers, no billable drift.
Mini exercise: write three questions that would unblock revision today. Keep each to two lines. Send only those in the first round. Add the rest after the call, if needed.
Coordinate with production
Proofreading needs page proofs. Schedule proofing after interior design. A proofreader will flag typos, plus layout issues such as headers, widows, orphans, and bad line breaks.
Sample sequence for a self‑pub novel:
- Copyedit wraps on May 10.
- Designer receives text on May 13 and returns first pages on May 27.
- Proofreading runs May 28 to June 3 on the PDF.
- Fixes flow to the designer June 4 to June 7.
- Final files export on June 10.
Add a hold date with the proofreader before design starts. A busy freelancer with no slot equals a scramble.
Build time and cash buffers
Scope shifts happen. A new scene. A rewrite on the opening. A second pass on the first chapter. Budget for that reality.
- Money buffer, 10 to 20 percent of the plan.
- Time buffer, at least one extra week between rounds.
Example: a $4,000 plan needs $400 to $800 in reserve. If nothing changes, that money funds marketing. If the opening needs a second look, no panic.
Sample timeline and cash flow
A realistic mid‑range plan for an 80,000‑word novel.
Rates and totals:
- Editorial assessment at $0.015 per word, $1,200.
- Developmental edit at $0.05 per word, $4,000.
- Line edit at $0.04 per word, $3,200.
- Copyedit at $0.03 per word, $2,400.
- Proofread at $0.015 per word, $1,200.
Cash plan with 30 percent deposits:
- Assessment. Deposit $360 on March 1. Balance $840 on March 15.
- Developmental. Deposit $1,200 on April 1. Balance $2,800 on May 6.
- Line. Deposit $960 on May 20. Balance $2,240 on June 17.
- Copyedit. Deposit $720 on July 1. Balance $1,680 on July 15.
- Proof. Deposit $360 on July 29. Balance $840 on August 5.
Calendar highlights:
- Assessment March 1 to March 15. Revise March 16 to April 7.
- Developmental April 8 to May 6. Revise May 7 to June 4.
- Line June 5 to June 26.
- Copy July 1 to July 15.
- Layout July 16 to July 28.
- Proof July 29 to August 5. Final fixes August 6 to August 9.
Notes:
- Book all five slots in February. Lock dates before launch season.
- Share a short risk list with every editor. For example, “new villain scene pending” or “timeline still messy in Act 2.”
- Reconfirm two weeks before each start. No surprises.
Keep momentum without burning out
Protect revision energy. Schedule days off after each delivery. One morning of rest saves a week of sluggish work.
Guard focus during revision:
- One round equals one goal. Structure in one pass, sentences in the next.
- Set word targets, for example 2,000 revised words per day.
- Use a deadline buddy. A friend who texts on Friday for a quick update.
Common scheduling traps
- Booking edits back to back without revision time in between. The next editor receives half‑baked pages and raises the level to heavy, which raises cost.
- Starting proofreading before layout. Typos will drop, layout gremlins will not.
- Forgetting time for permissions or captions in nonfiction. Pages stall while sources respond.
- Overlapping a release campaign with edits. Marketing drains focus from revision and payments stack in one month.
What to confirm before you sign
- Start and end dates for every phase.
- Deposit amount, due date, and refund terms.
- Delivery method. Word with Track Changes, Google Docs, or PDF markup.
- Follow‑up scope. One call and a short Q and A window, or email only.
- Proofreading format. Designed pages, not the Word file.
Action: create a simple Gantt‑style calendar. One row per phase. Columns for start date, end date, invoice date, deposit amount, balance due, and revision window. Add a small buffer row after each phase. Color code payment days. Keep this file open during the whole project. A clear plan saves fees and keeps the book moving.
Reduce Costs Without Cutting Quality
You want a strong edit without draining the account. Good. Most savings come from smarter prep, sharper scope, and clear expectations. Here is how to keep standards high while trimming spend.
Trim word count before quotes
Per‑word pricing rewards lean prose. Cut 10,000 words and the quote drops fast.
- Copyedit at $0.03 per word on 90,000 words equals $2,700. Trim to 80,000 and the same rate equals $2,400. You keep $300.
- Developmental at $0.06 per word on 90,000 words equals $5,400. Trim to 80,000 and you pay $4,800. You keep $600.
Where to cut:
- Scenes that repeat the same beat or stake.
- Side characters without a job in the plot.
- Backstory blocks that slow the present scene.
- Weasel words. Very, really, actually, and friends.
Quick exercise: list five scenes that do not move plot or deepen character. Pick two to delete or merge today.
Do targeted self‑edits
A focused pass before hiring reduces level, which lowers cost and shortens timelines.
Structure pass:
- Map beats per chapter. Something important changes or the scene goes.
- Track stakes. What rises, what drops, who pays a price.
- Check POV. One lens per scene. Head hops confuse readers and burn editing hours.
Clarity pass:
- Search for filter words such as felt, seemed, noticed, realized, started to, began to. Replace with direct action.
- Trim filler phrases such as in order to, due to the fact, at this point in time.
- Read dialogue out loud. Cut greetings, throat clearing, and repeated names.
Consistency pass:
- Build a style sheet. Names, places, hyphenation choices, capitalization, numbers, dates, series title format.
- Lock voice choices. Okay or OK, toward or towards, e‑mail or email.
- Track timelines. Day and date per chapter, travel times, ages, holidays.
A strong style sheet saves your copyeditor an hour or three. That savings often shows up in a lower level quote.
Use beta readers and critique partners
Recruit three to five readers who love your genre. Give them a clear brief and a deadline.
Provide a short questionnaire:
- Where did attention wander, and why.
- Which character felt thin.
- Any plot point that confused you.
- One scene you loved. One you would cut.
- Would you read book two.
Use their notes to target fixes in one more revision round. Arrive at professional editing with fewer structural gaps and cleaner pages.
Tip: mix one or two genre diehards with one general reader. The blend helps you catch both trope logic and clarity issues.
Target the spend with a paid sample edit
A 1,000‑word sample edit is a smart filter. Request a representative scene, not the opening only. Pay for the time.
How to compare:
- Do comments diagnose cause, not only symptoms.
- Does the editor protect your voice while improving flow.
- Are examples specific. Edits should show, not lecture.
- Is there a brief style note or mini sheet.
Pick the editor whose notes level up your pages. The right partner saves money later because feedback lands and revisions work.
Negotiate scope, not quality
You are not haggling over commas. You are right‑sizing work to your goals and budget.
Options to discuss:
- Shorter edit letter. For example, 5 to 7 pages instead of 12 to 15, with a tighter focus on top three issues.
- Fewer passes. One strong pass instead of two lighter loops.
- Focused line edit. First 25,000 words to set voice and patterns, then a lighter pass or copyedit on the rest.
- Chapter triage. Deep dive on problem chapters flagged in beta reads.
Savings example for an 85,000‑word novel:
- Full line edit at $0.05 equals $4,250.
- Line edit on the first 25,000 words, $1,250, plus copyedit on 60,000 words at $0.03 equals $1,800. Total $3,050. You save $1,200 and still improve voice where readers sample.
Compare value, not price
Two quotes at the same rate rarely deliver the same package. Ask for specifics so you are matching apples to apples.
Confirm:
- Per‑word rate, word count used for the quote, and total.
- Deliverables. Edit letter length, number of in‑text comments, scene map or outline, style sheet detail.
- Format. Track Changes in Word, Google Docs, or PDF markup.
- Follow‑up. One call included, or email only, and how long the Q and A window stays open.
- Add‑ons. Second pass terms, rush fees, heavy‑edit surcharges, fact‑checking scope.
- Style guide. Chicago for fiction and most nonfiction, plus dictionary choice.
A slightly higher rate with a clear style sheet and a solid call often beats a lower rate with vague deliverables and no support.
Do the math before you trim
One more exercise. Price two paths for a 70,000‑word novel.
Path A, full line at $0.04 equals $2,800, then copyedit at $0.03 equals $2,100. Total $4,900.
Path B, editorial assessment at $0.015 equals $1,050, revise, then copyedit at $0.03 equals $2,100, then proofread at $0.015 equals $1,050. Total $4,200.
Different paths serve different needs. If structure still wobbles, Path B often lands a stronger book for less money.
Action step when a quote feels high
Ask for an alternative package. Keep it professional and specific.
Sample note you can adapt:
- Thank you for the quote and the breakdown.
- My budget target is $X for this stage.
- Would you suggest an option that keeps impact but lowers scope. For example, an editorial assessment now, then a discounted second look at the first three chapters after revision. Or a focused line edit on the opening 25,000 words, then a copyedit on the full.
- I am open to your guidance on where effort pays off most for this manuscript.
Respect earns respect. Editors want your book to thrive and will often guide you toward the best spend for your goals.
Frequently Asked Questions
What does a developmental editing package typically include and how do editors price it?
A standard developmental edit delivers an edit letter (diagnosis and concrete fixes), margin comments throughout the manuscript, and usually a consult call to prioritise revisions. Some packages add a scene map, beat sheet or a second‑look review on revised pages — those extras drive the fee higher because they require additional hours.
Editors price developmental work per word, hourly, or as a flat project fee; always ask for the per‑word equivalent so you can compare like with like. Scope — number of passes, letter depth, margin comment density and follow‑up support — matters more than the label on an invoice.
How do I decide between an editorial assessment and a full developmental edit?
Use a quick readiness test: if you need a diagnosis and a revision roadmap because the spine or stakes are unclear, an editorial assessment (shorter letter, minimal in‑text work) is the cost‑effective start. If you’re ready to rebuild scenes now and want scene‑level coaching with sample rewrites, choose a full developmental edit.
If you’re unsure, commission a paid sample edit (for example 1,000–3,000 words) — that shows how the editor reads your pages and helps you decide whether to escalate to a full developmental edit or run the recommended revisions first.
What should I request in a brief or quote to compare editors fairly?
Submit a concise editorial brief with genre, target reader, comps, word count, draft state, services sought and timeline. Ask each editor for the per‑word equivalent, edit letter length, estimated margin comments (light or heavy coaching), meeting time, and follow‑up support or second‑look terms so you can compare deliverables as well as price.
Also request a paid sample edit or a redacted example of a previous edit; seeing the editor’s tone, specificity and use of a style sheet helps you choose the right fit rather than the cheapest option.
Which supporting documents shorten editor hours and reduce the quote?
Provide a scene inventory or scene map (one line per scene with POV, purpose and turn), a timeline, character sheets and a glossary for invented terms. These support docs prevent the editor from having to reconstruct the book map and cut down billable detective work.
For complex projects — braided timelines, many POVs or heavy worldbuilding — the time you invest in clean support materials typically lowers the per‑word equivalent and produces clearer, faster developmental notes.
How can I reduce a developmental edit quote without sacrificing quality?
Tighten the manuscript first: run a beat audit, cut scenes with no turn, remove filler phrases and standardise formatting (Word with Track Changes). Trim word count where possible — per‑word pricing rewards lean prose — and supply a short style sheet listing names and spelling choices to save copying time later.
Consider targeted options such as an assessment followed by a focused developmental pass on the opening acts, or a paid sample edit on the opening and a knotty scene. Negotiating scope (fewer passes, leaner letter, focused chapters) preserves impact while lowering cost.
What is a “second look” and when should I budget for one?
A second look is a follow‑up review of revised material — commonly the revised opening, midpoint or climax — to check whether structural changes landed and to catch ripple effects. It is labour‑intensive because the editor must rebuild their map of the manuscript, so it typically costs a significant fraction of the original pass.
Budget for a second look when you anticipate a substantial rewrite or new scenes; if you want reassurance that the opening and midpoint now work, request a quoted second look on a specified word count (for example 5–10k words) in your original brief to avoid surprises.
How should I phase edits, plan timelines and manage cash flow for a full editorial stack?
Phase the work: assessment → developmental → line → copy → proof on designed pages. Allow revision windows between stages (typically several weeks) and book editor slots early to avoid rush fees. Most editors require a deposit (25–50%) with balance on delivery or set milestones for long projects.
Create a simple calendar and cash plan with deposit dates and final payments, and include a 10–20% money and time buffer for second looks or scope shifts; this reduces stress and prevents rushed, costly decisions late in production.
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