How To Find The Right Book Editor For Your Genre
Table of Contents
- Define Your Genre and the Editing You Actually Need
- Build a Targeted Shortlist of Genre‑Savvy Editors
- Evaluate Fit with Samples, Questions, and Communication Style
- Compare Scope, Pricing, and Contracts Without Apples‑to‑Oranges
- Red Flags and How to Build a Long‑Term Partnership
- Frequently Asked Questions
Define Your Genre and the Editing You Actually Need
You find the right editor by knowing where your book sits on the shelf. Genre, subgenre, audience. Name them. Get those wrong, you waste money and time.
Pin down genre, audience, and comps
Try a quick shelf test.
- Where would a bookseller file your novel or nonfiction? Be specific. Cozy mystery, epic fantasy, narrative nonfiction, business leadership.
- Who reads it? Age range, heat level or gore level, attention span, professional or general audience.
- Name two or three comps from the past five years. Same vibe, similar promise, similar reader expectations. Mix one well known title with one midlist in your niche.
Template line to keep you honest:
My book is a [subgenre] for [target reader], about [protagonist or promise], for fans of [Comp A] and [Comp B], at [word count].
Examples:
- Cozy mystery with a baker sleuth in a seaside town. Low on gore. High on community and clues. For readers of Ellie Alexander and Mia P. Manansala.
- Epic fantasy with multi‑POV and hard magic rules. Big battles and political intrigue. For fans of Samantha Shannon and John Gwynne.
- Narrative nonfiction on burnout in medicine. Doctor stories plus practical tools. For readers of Atul Gawande and Cal Newport.
An editor who works in your lane reads this and nods. Good sign.
Match problems to the right edit
Each stage solves a different problem. Start with the problem, not the service.
- Developmental edit. Structure, tropes, pacing, market fit. Signs you need it: beta readers report confusion about goals or stakes. The middle sags. Genre promise feels faint. Opening pages do not land the hook.
- Line edit. Style, rhythm, voice. Signs you need it: sentences sound flat. Dialogue drifts off‑topic. Repetition and filter words dull the edge. Paragraphs run long.
- Copyedit. Grammar, usage, consistency, style guide. Signs you need it: commas roam. Hyphenation shifts. POV pronouns slip. World terms vary from chapter to chapter.
- Proofread. Final pass after layout. Signs you need it: you plan print or ebook. You care about embarrassing typos in Look Inside and in your paperback.
Quick triage:
- Confusion and sagging pace. Go developmental.
- Clear story but clunky prose. Go line.
- Clean voice but small errors. Go copyedit.
- Typeset files ready to ship. Go proofread.
Consider lighter diagnostics
Early draft and a tight budget? Ask for an editorial assessment or manuscript critique. You receive a big‑picture letter with priorities and examples. No line‑by‑line margin notes. Cost sits below a full developmental edit and still gives a map for revision.
Use this when:
- You want confirmation on structure before deep prose work.
- You know the heart of the book, yet order and stakes feel off.
- You need a plan you can execute over a few months.
Genre nuances your editor should speak fluently
Every category carries promises. Your editor should spot them on page one.
- Romance. Heat level, consent, trope mix, and a HEA or HFN. Do the beats land in the right order. Is the conflict internal, external, or both. Are side plots stealing oxygen from the central couple.
- Science fiction and fantasy. World rules, cost of magic or tech, POV control across maps and timelines. Are info drops trimmed. Do names, ranks, and invented terms stay consistent.
- Thriller and suspense. Escalating stakes, reversals, reveals. Does each chapter end with forward pressure. Is the villain plan coherent when read straight through.
- Children’s and YA. Page turns, read‑aloud cadence, vocabulary, age‑appropriate stakes. Picture books often target 300 to 600 words. Chapter books sit near 7k to 12k. Editors in kidlit watch rhythm as much as plot.
- Business and practical nonfiction. Promise of value on page one. Clear throughline from problem to outcomes. Credible case studies. Citations in order. Sidebars, figures, and calls to action that serve the main argument.
If an editor shrugs at these specifics, keep looking.
Align with your publishing path
Your path shapes your spend.
- Querying. Prioritize developmental help and a sharp opening package. An assessment or developmental edit, a targeted line pass on the first 50 pages, and a light copyedit on the query and synopsis. Agents read the first pages first, so load quality there.
- Indie self‑publishing. Budget for the full stack. Developmental, line, copyedit, proof. Book slots early. Give the proofreader the laid‑out PDF and epub, not a Word file.
Mini‑exercise: write a one‑page brief
Editors quote faster and smarter when you give a tight brief. One page only. Paste the sample chapter below it.
Include:
- Genre and subgenre.
- Word count and target audience.
- One‑sentence pitch.
- Two or three comps and why you chose them.
- Pain points. Be honest. Examples help. Pace sags in Act Two. Too many subplots. Dialogue feels stiff.
- Desired service. Developmental, assessment, line, copyedit, proof.
- Timeline and flexibility.
- Special notes. British or US spelling. Heat level. Content sensitivities. Style guide preference.
Example brief, short and useful:
- Genre. Contemporary romance, low heat, small town.
- Word count. 82k. Audience. Adult.
- Pitch. A burned‑out chef returns home to save her father’s diner and falls for the health inspector.
- Comps. The Flatshare for tone. The Ex Talk for workplace conflict.
- Pain points. Middle third drifts. Hero’s motivation thin. Need help balancing foodie detail with pace.
- Desired service. Developmental assessment, then line edit on first 40 pages, then full copyedit.
- Timeline. Assessment slot in August. Line in October. Copyedit in November.
- Notes. US spelling. No profanity in final draft. Chicago style.
Send three briefs to three editors on your shortlist. The replies will teach you a lot. Look for genre fluency, clear scopes, and feedback that improves your sample pages on the spot. Choose the editor whose notes sharpen your work without sanding off your voice.
Build a Targeted Shortlist of Genre‑Savvy Editors
You want editors who live in your lane. Not generalists who once read a thriller on vacation. Start where specialists gather, then verify with receipts.
Start in the right places
Work from credible hubs first.
- EFA, CIEP, and ACES list freelancers with profiles and specialties. Use filters. Search by genre and service.
- Reedsy shows portfolios, samples, and rates. Sort by your genre tag.
- SCBWI is gold for kidlit. IBPA helps indie authors across categories.
- Ask in focused communities. Author forums, Discord servers, conference Slack groups. Be specific when you post. “Looking for a line editor for adult epic fantasy, 120k, strong combat scenes.”
Do not treat a directory as a stamp of quality. It is a starting point. You still vet.
Hunt credits in the wild
Good editors get thanked. Track those trails.
- Open Look Inside on Amazon for comps. Jump to Acknowledgments. Search for “editor,” “developmental,” or a name after “thank.” Note editors and book titles.
- Visit author websites. Many list their editors on a Team or Book page.
- Check podcasts and blog interviews. Authors often share who shaped the book.
Now google those names plus “editor.” You want a website with services, clear offerings, and recent work.
Vet portfolios fast
You are matching skills to your project, not collecting pretty websites.
- Genre match. Do their credits line up with your subgenre. Cozy mystery is not the same as police procedural. Space opera is not hard sci‑fi.
- Services. Do they name developmental, line, copyediting, or proofreading. Clear definitions save you from scope surprises.
- Proof of outcomes. Testimonials with full author names and book titles. Links to published books. A mix of trad and indie work is fine. You want patterns that fit your path.
- Currency. Recent projects. Active blog or interviews. An editor who last updated in 2019 may be booked or retired.
If their portfolio shows only memoir while you write cyberpunk, move on.
Look for process transparency
Editors serious about process tell you how they work.
- Sample policy. Do they offer a paid sample edit. Is the sample length stated. Are you allowed to compare one chapter across multiple candidates.
- Deliverables. What arrives at the end. Edit letter length. Track Changes comments. A style sheet for names, terms, hyphenation, and usage. Any scene map or summary grid.
- Timelines and availability. Estimated start date and turnaround by service. A note on booking windows. Some editors book months ahead.
- Boundaries. What they will not do. Heavy rewriting. Sensitivity reads outside their lived experience. Fact‑checking.
Clarity here saves you headaches later.
Listen for genre fluency
You learn a lot from how someone talks about your category. Read a blog post or listen to a podcast episode they did on your genre.
- Romance editors talk beats, heat levels, POV intimacy, and HEA or HFN. They do not roll their eyes at tropes. They place them with care.
- SFF editors discuss world rules, cost of magic or tech, exposition control, and naming. They track series continuity like accountants.
- Thriller editors break down ticking clocks, reversals, clue placement, and plausibility checks across the reveal.
- Kidlit editors think in word counts, page turns, read‑aloud rhythm, and gatekeepers like librarians and parents.
- Business nonfiction editors talk promise of value, reader outcomes, case study ethics, and citations. They know Chicago for books.
If an editor writes vaguely about “great stories” without specifics, keep looking.
Build a shortlist system
You will forget who said what after three tabs. Use a simple spreadsheet. Five to ten names is plenty.
Columns to include:
- Name and website.
- Genre match. Note subgenres they show.
- Services offered. Dev, line, copyedit, proof.
- Rates. Capture per‑word or convert hourly or flat quotes to a per‑word equivalent.
- Deliverables. Edit letter length, comments count, style sheet, calls.
- Availability. Next open slot and estimated timeline.
- Experience notes. Key credits, trad or indie mix, series experience.
- Sample policy. Length, cost, turnaround.
- Vibe. Short note on tone from their site or emails. Direct. Warm. Brisk.
- Questions. What you still need to ask.
Add a quick score from 1 to 5 for genre fit and process clarity. Sort by the totals. Now you have a ranked target list, not a random pile of bookmarks.
What to send when you reach out
Make contact easy to answer. You get better replies, and faster quotes.
Subject line: Adult epic fantasy, 120k, seeking developmental edit
Body:
- One sentence pitch. The Crown meets Mistborn with a mother‑daughter heist.
- Genre and subgenre. Adult epic fantasy, multi‑POV, low romance.
- Word count. 120,000.
- Two comps. John Gwynne for tone. Samantha Shannon for scale.
- Pain points. Middle sags after chapter 12. Magic costs muddy. Unsure if the heist beats land.
- Desired service and timing. Developmental edit in June or July.
- Attachments. First chapter and a brief synopsis in .docx. Double spaced.
- Preferences. US spelling. Chicago style.
Ask three things:
- Are you available in June or July.
- Would you suggest a full dev edit or an editorial assessment based on the sample.
- What are your deliverables and fee structure for this scope.
Send to three to five editors tops. Give them a week. Do not shotgun twenty emails. You want a conversation, not a lottery.
A quick note on referrals
Referrals are gold when targeted. Ask authors with books close to yours. “Who edited your second thriller. Did you feel your pacing improved.” Specific questions yield useful answers. If someone loved their editor for a cozy mystery, and you write erotic romance, say thank you and move on. Fit matters.
Once responses arrive, plug the data into your sheet. Compare on genre fluency, process, and the sample edit if offered. The right shortlist is tight and intentional. It points you toward editors who know your readers and can help you reach them.
Evaluate Fit with Samples, Questions, and Communication Style
You picked names. Now you need proof on the page. A strong editor meets you where your book lives, then pushes you to level up without sanding off your voice.
Get a paid sample edit, same chapter for each
Ask for a 1,000 to 2,000 word sample. Use the same chapter for every editor. Early pages with core voice and a tricky scene work well.
What to send:
- The pages in .docx, double spaced.
- A one‑paragraph pitch and comps.
- Your pain points for these pages. For example, “Dialogue feels flat,” or “POV slips in battle scenes.”
What to look for:
- Depth. Do notes dig into story logic, structure, and reader promise, not only commas.
- Tone. Direct yet respectful. No snark.
- Voice care. Edits that honor your cadence, vocabulary, and rhythm.
Quick test:
- Read the edited pages with markup hidden. Does your voice still sound like you.
- Now show markup. Are changes explained. Do comments teach a principle, or only issue orders.
Two sample approaches, same sentence:
- “He storms down the hall, heart racing, the floor tilting beneath his feet.” Editor A: deletes “storms,” inserts “runs,” adds “you already have speed from context.” Editor B: rewrites entire line into a new metaphor. One tightens. One overwrites. You know which one helps.
Pay for the sample. Free samples tend to be rushed. A paid slice shows real process.
Ask questions that surface judgment
Shortlist strong on paper. Now test thinking. Send three to five questions, focused on your genre and your goals.
Good prompts:
- How do you assess conventions and comps for this category, and where do my pages meet or miss those.
- What is your approach to POV control here, including psychic distance and head‑hopping risks.
- How do you evaluate pacing and stakes across a chapter, and across an act.
- How do you handle sensitivity concerns and when do you bring in a specialist reader.
- For series, how do you track continuity across books.
Listen for specificity. A romance editor mentions beat sheets, heat levels, and HEA or HFN. An SFF editor talks cost of magic, exposition ratio, and name systems. A thriller editor maps clues, reversals, and misdirection rules. Vague praise helps no one.
Confirm tools and deliverables
You are not buying vibes. You are buying artifacts.
Non‑negotiables worth confirming:
- Track Changes for in‑text edits and comments.
- A style sheet tailored to your book. Character names, places, hyphenation, numbers, dialogue punctuation, world terms.
- An edit letter with priorities, not a stream of sticky notes. Length varies, often 5 to 15 pages for dev work. You want a ranked to‑do list and next steps.
- File format and naming. One clean file, one marked file, version dates.
Ask to see a redacted sample style sheet or edit letter. One page is enough to show structure.
Nonfiction needs extra checks
Nonfiction asks for different muscles. Verify comfort with:
- Citations. Footnotes or endnotes. Reference list cleanup. Which style guide they follow. Chicago for books is standard.
- Figures and tables. Numbering, captions, callouts in text, alt text notes for accessibility.
- Fact‑checking boundaries. What they verify during editing, and what remains author work.
- Claims and sources. How they flag weak evidence or legal risk.
If your book includes interviews or data, ask how they handle transcripts, charts, and permissions.
Assess collaboration, not only edits
Process fit saves weeks of friction. Clarify how work moves from hello to done.
Cover these points:
- Response time. Typical email window during a project. One to two business days is common.
- Debrief options. A call after delivery, length, and who leads. Look for a focused agenda.
- Q&A window. Time frame for follow‑up questions after you review notes.
- Second‑look or cleanup pass. Offered or not. Scope for that pass.
- Boundaries. Weekends, holidays, and office hours.
Tone matters. You want direct, kind, and evidence based. You do not want cheerleading with no spine. You also do not want line rewrites that erase voice. Ask for one example of a note they wrote where the author disagreed, and how they resolved it. You learn a lot from that story.
A simple scoring grid
Once samples and answers land, step back. Score each editor in four areas, 1 to 5.
- Genre fluency. Do their notes show command of your category’s promises.
- Clarity of feedback. Are comments specific, prioritized, and actionable.
- Bedside manner. Respectful tone. No ego spikes. Willing to explain choices.
- Usefulness of sample. Did changes improve rhythm, logic, and reader pull.
Add two gut checks:
- Did you feel smarter about your book after reading their notes.
- Did you want to open the file and revise.
Pick the highest score only if those gut checks agree. If two editors tie, send one follow‑up question to each, specific to a thorny moment in your sample pages. For example, “Would you keep this reveal in chapter three, or seed it later, and why.” The sharper answer earns the project.
Email template to keep things clean
Subject: 1,500‑word sample request, YA mystery, 70k, line edit
Body:
- Pitch, comps, word count.
- What you want from the sample. “Please focus on line‑level flow and POV consistency.”
- Deadline for the sample and decision date.
- Ask for rate, deliverables for a full project, earliest start date.
- Confirm you are paying for the sample and the amount.
Attach the pages. Include a brief synopsis if structure matters to the sample.
One last thing. Respect your own time. Three samples is plenty. More than five blurs differences. Your goal is not to crown a universal best editor. Your goal is to hire the one whose notes lift your pages today, in your genre, for your readers.
Compare Scope, Pricing, and Contracts Without Apples‑to‑Oranges
Quotes arrive. They look nothing alike. One flat fee. One hourly. One per word with a footnote about a second pass. You need a fair comparison, not guesswork.
Make prices comparable
Pricing models you will see:
- Per word, the easiest for apples‑to‑apples.
- Hourly, with a range of hours.
- Flat fee, often with a page limit or word cap.
Ask every editor for a per‑word equivalent. Use your full word count, not an estimate you hope to hit after cuts.
Simple math:
- Flat fee 1,800 dollars for a 75,000 word novel equals 0.024 per word.
- Hourly 55 dollars, estimated 35 to 45 hours on an 80,000 word draft. That lands between 0.024 and 0.031 per word. Compute it this way, hours times rate divided by word count.
Now you have a footing. Next, match price to what you receive.
Lock the scope and deliverables
A low per‑word rate with thin deliverables costs more in the end. Define the work.
For developmental editing, verify:
- Edit letter length and structure. For example, twelve pages with priorities, not a ramble.
- In‑text comments. A target or range. Across the full manuscript, not only the opening.
- Tools. Track Changes, margin notes that explain the why, not only the what.
- Extras, if offered. A scene map, beat sheet, or summary grid.
For line or copyediting, verify:
- One marked file plus a clean file.
- A book‑specific style sheet. Characters, places, spelling choices, hyphenation, numbers, dialogue quirks, world terms.
- How deep the line work goes. Syntax and rhythm, or surface fixes only.
- A second pass or not. If yes, define scope and length. For example, a quick cleanup after you accept or reject changes.
For any edit, verify calls and Q&A:
- Number and length of calls. Who leads and what agenda they use.
- A Q&A window after delivery. One to two weeks is common. Ask for a number of hours or a time frame in writing.
Ask to see redacted samples of deliverables. One page of a style sheet. A table of contents from a past edit letter. You want evidence of process.
Timelines and cash flow
Dates matter as much as dollars.
Cover these points:
- Deposit to hold the slot. Twenty five to fifty percent is standard. Make sure the deposit applies to the final invoice.
- Start and delivery dates on the calendar. Include time zones.
- Milestones. For example, first half due on the start date, balance due on delivery.
- Response times during the project. One to two business days avoids drift.
- Rush fees. Book early to avoid them. If you need a rush, expect a surcharge and shorter Q&A.
Ask about blackout dates, vacations, and holidays. Confirm who sends the nudge if either side slips.
Add‑ons that change cost
Surprises live in the margins. Name them upfront.
Common add‑ons:
- Heavy edit surcharge on rough drafts or ESL contexts. Often a higher per‑word rate after a sample review.
- Fact‑checking. Editors are not reporters. If they offer checks, define scope. Names, dates, quotes, claims, and what sources they will accept.
- Reference list cleanup. Chicago formatting, cross‑checks between notes and bibliography.
- Layout‑stage work. PDF page‑proof checks after typesetting. Marking widows and orphans, cross‑reference breaks, bad line wraps in code blocks or poetry.
- Sensitivity review. Sometimes in‑house, sometimes a specialist reader. Clarify who hires and pays the reader.
- File wrangling. Transcripts, figure callouts, alt text notes, image permissions.
Each add‑on needs a rate and a cap, either per word, per hour with a ceiling, or a flat price with a word or page limit.
Terms that protect you
A clear contract saves the friendship. Read every line.
Look for:
- Scope definition. Project word count locked on a date. What happens if you deliver 10,000 extra words. A change‑order process helps here.
- Cancellation and refund policy. What portion of the deposit is refundable before start, and after work begins.
- Payment schedule. Amounts, due dates, and late fees.
- Confidentiality. An NDA if your project requires one. At minimum, a clause that keeps your manuscript private.
- IP ownership. You retain all rights to the manuscript and edits. No claim to copyright by the editor.
- Credit language. Optional, but helpful if you plan to thank your editor in the book.
- Tools and file types. Word files with Track Changes, Google Docs if both approve, PDF for proofs.
- Version control. File naming with dates, who owns the master at each step, and a manuscript freeze during each stage to stop scope creep.
- Liability and indemnity. No editor should accept legal risk for your content. You accept responsibility for facts and permissions.
If a term feels vague, ask for a sentence that leaves no daylight. Here is the tone you want.
- “This quote covers 82,000 words. Work on additional words will pause pending a new quote.”
- “One revision pass is included. Scope limited to clarifying line edits and minor rewrites, up to 10,000 affected words.”
- “The editor will deliver a 10 to 15 page edit letter with prioritized next steps.”
A quick comparison exercise
Build a tiny grid in your notes. Three rows, three editors. Five columns.
- Per‑word equivalent.
- Deliverables list. Edit letter pages, in‑text comments, style sheet, calls, second pass.
- Timeline. Start date and delivery date.
- Add‑ons priced and defined.
- Contract strength. Clear, partial, or vague.
Now read your sample pages again. Pick the editor whose offer shows value on paper and value in your gut.
Budget buffer and negotiation
Negotiate scope first. Price follows scope. Trim or add deliverables until the shape fits your goals.
Add a buffer in your budget. Ten to twenty percent covers surprise cleanup, a longer Q&A, or a proofread after layout.
A quick budget sketch for context:
- Developmental edit at 0.035 per word on 90,000 words equals 3,150 dollars.
- Line edit at 0.02 per word equals 1,800 dollars.
- Copyedit at 0.018 per word equals 1,620 dollars.
- Proofread on PDF at 0.01 per word equals 900 dollars.
- A 15 percent buffer equals 1,060 dollars.
Total project plan, 8,530 dollars. Your numbers will differ. The point is simple. Decide what you need, write it into the scope, compare per‑word, then sign a contract that respects both sides.
Red Flags and How to Build a Long‑Term Partnership
Editing is intimate work. Time, money, ego. You need a partner who respects all three.
Spot the trouble early
These are the signs to walk away.
- “Guaranteed bestseller” or “I will get you an agent.” No one controls outcomes like that.
- No sample edit or references. A pro offers a way to assess fit, even if the sample is paid.
- Vague deliverables. “Developmental edit” with no edit letter length, no mention of comments, no Q&A. That is smoke.
- Fantasy timelines. A full dev edit on a 100,000 word epic in a week. No.
- Genre snobbery. “I do not read romance, but edits are edits.” Hard stop.
- No contract. Or a one‑line email that says “I’ll fix it.” You need terms.
- Full payment upfront without a slot on the calendar.
- Refusal to use Track Changes. You need a record of what changed and why.
- Outsourcing without disclosure. Your name, your book. You deserve to know who touches the file.
Gut check exercise, five minutes. Pull the last message from the editor. Circle anything concrete. Dates, dollar amounts, page counts, page ranges, word limits, call length, pass count, edit letter pages, tools. If your page stays mostly blank, move on.
Expect tough love, not takeover
Helpful notes sound like this.
- “Your thriller promises a cat‑and‑mouse plot. The midpoint reveals the killer, which drops tension. Suggest moving the reveal to Act Three or adding a reversal at 60 percent.”
- “POV slips in Chapter Four. Two lines drift into the detective’s head while we sit in the reporter’s POV. Marked in comments. Pick one lens per scene.”
- “Romance arc meets HFN, but the conflict resolves offstage. Give us the confrontation on the page.”
Unhelpful notes sound like this.
- “Make it more literary.”
- “Cut 30,000 words,” with no plan.
- Rewriting your sentences to sound like the editor. Voice theft.
Ask for evidence. A good editor ties notes to reader expectations in your genre, cites comps, and points to specific pages. You should feel smarter about your own book after reading the letter.
Start small if unsure
Test the relationship before handing over the whole manuscript.
- Commission an editorial assessment. You receive a big‑picture letter, not line edits. Lower cost. High insight.
- Or hire a first‑three‑chapters edit plus a synopsis pass. You see how they handle line work, pacing, and voice.
How to judge the sample:
- Do you recognize your voice on the page after their changes?
- Do comments explain the why behind each suggestion?
- Do you feel clear on next steps, or more confused than before?
If the sample raises your game, expand the scope. If not, pay the invoice, thank them, and keep looking.
Be the client editors love
Great work flows both ways. Set the stage for clean, focused edits.
- Deliver your cleanest draft. Run a spellcheck. Fix obvious continuity slips. A tidy file saves budget for higher level work.
- State preferences up front. US or UK spelling. Oxford comma or not. POV and tense. Heat level. Sensitivity boundaries.
- Share comps and audience. “Fans of T. Kingfisher and Naomi Novik.” “Upper MG, 9 to 12, read‑aloud friendly.”
- Consolidate questions. Keep one list. Numbered. Tied to pages or scenes.
- Respect the calendar. Send the file on time. Answer queries inside the agreed window.
- Use the same file naming scheme. BookTitle_V3_2025‑02‑10.docx. No mysteries in your Dropbox.
Quick prep checklist:
- One‑page brief attached.
- Final word count noted.
- Style notes at the top of the file.
- Comps listed.
- Three things you fear are not working.
- Three things you do not want touched without a talk.
Build the relationship
You are hiring for this book, and likely the next one. Treat it like a series partnership.
- Credit your editor in acknowledgments if the work merits it. Ask how they want to be listed.
- Share outcomes. Reviews, awards, sales milestones, agent interest. Editors track results to refine their advice.
- Pre‑book slots. Series authors, hold your editor for Book Two and Three. Continuity saves you from re‑teaching your world.
- Keep the style sheet alive. Update as you draft the next book. Send it before the next edit.
- Give clear feedback on the process. What worked, what you want done differently next time.
Sample note for rebooking:
“Book Two draft at 85,000 words in progress, on track for July. Do you have August or September availability for a dev edit, two‑week window, one follow‑up call?”
If the fit feels off, pause
You owe yourself a book that sounds like you. Not a book that pleases a stranger.
Signs the fit is off:
- You dread opening their comments.
- They mock the genre or your readers.
- Edits flatten your voice.
- Deadlines slip with thin updates.
Script for a reset:
“Thanks for the work so far. I need to pause to reassess direction. The voice and genre positioning feel misaligned with my goals. I will pay for completed work to date per the contract. Once I review next steps, I will be in touch.”
If you are torn, seek a second opinion. Share five pages of the edit and the edit letter with another pro. Ask one focused question. “Do these notes align with current expectations for cozy mystery pacing and series hooks?” A sound second read brings clarity fast.
The throughline
Aim for professional, candid, and specific. Expect edits anchored in your category. Start small if trust is still forming. Be the sort of client who makes good work possible. Keep the door open for book two. And if misalignment shows up, step back, breathe, and choose the partner who helps your pages sing without stealing your voice.
Frequently Asked Questions
How do I decide which level of editing my manuscript actually needs?
Map the symptom to the service: confusion, plot holes or a sagging middle signals developmental editing; clunky sentences, flat voice or wooden dialogue need a line edit; grammar noise and inconsistent hyphenation call for copyediting; and typos on the final pages require proofreading on the designed PDF. Use beta‑reader feedback and a quick reverse outline (one line per scene: goal, conflict, outcome) to confirm which layer will move the book forward.
What should I include in a one‑page brief when contacting potential editors?
Keep it tight: genre and subgenre, target reader, word count, one‑sentence pitch, two comps and why, three pain points (for example “Act II drifts” or “POV slips in battle scenes”), the service you want, timeline and any style preferences (US/UK spelling, Chicago). Attach the sample chapter in .docx and a one‑page synopsis so editors can quote accurately and fast.
How do I compare editor quotes without getting apples‑to‑oranges offers?
Convert every quote to a per‑word equivalent (flat fee ÷ word count or (hourly rate × estimated hours) ÷ word count) so you have a common metric. More important than rate is deliverables: edit letter length, margin comment density, whether a style sheet and a debrief call are included, and any second‑look terms — compare those line by line before choosing.
What should I expect from a paid sample edit and how should I use it?
Commission a paid sample edit of 1,000–2,000 words from the same chapter across candidates. Look for edits that diagnose cause, protect your voice, and offer teachable comments rather than blunt rewrites. Read the edited pages with markup hidden — your voice should still feel like yours — then inspect comments to judge clarity, specificity and genre fluency.
How should I phase edits and plan payments to manage cash flow?
Phase work in sequence: assessment → developmental → revise → line → copy → proof (on designed pages). Book slots early, allow revision windows between stages and expect a deposit (commonly 25–50%) to hold dates, with the balance due on delivery or at agreed milestones. Always build a 10–20% money and time buffer for second looks or scope shifts.
What are common red flags when choosing an editor?
Red flags include promises of “guaranteed bestseller” outcomes, no sample edit or references, vague deliverables, unrealistically fast turnarounds for long manuscripts, full payment upfront without a start date, refusal to use Track Changes, or undisclosed outsourcing. If an editor can’t spell out edit letter length, comment scope and a Q&A window, treat the proposal with caution.
How can I reduce editing costs without cutting the book’s quality?
Trim word count before you quote (every 10,000 words removed lowers per‑word spend), do targeted self‑edits (reverse outline, scene goals, filter‑word pass), build a one‑page style sheet for names and hyphenation, and use beta readers to fix obvious holes. Consider a targeted paid sample or a line edit on the first 25–30k to set voice, then copyedit the rest — that hybrid approach often saves money while preserving professional polish.
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